Comments : My Warrior

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I'm sorry, I hope the cancer didn't return and that it's just a false alarm. To be honest, this piece made me cried towards the end of it.

    Keep writing and releasing that tension, it helps a little bit.

    • 12 years ago

      by Hannah Lizette

      Thanks so much, and me too. :( And yes, writing usually helps so much!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I hope its not a serious thing, you must keep hope. The poem is touching, well done:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hannah this is completely sad but beautiful in the words you've used, like a prayer.

    I really hope that your father is OK. I hope that it is nothing serious and whatever it is, he is cured! A poem that has really come from the heart

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Hope all the best for him.
    Thanks for sharing this, keep writing~

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    Love the poem and the beautiful prayer you wrote. Not to mention you got into me deeply with the last lines of

    But God if this is his fate,
    I beg of you to not make him wait,
    please let him enter your gate,
    so he can be with mommy once more.

    Hugs and know someone is also praying for him and you too

  • Oh dear! I hope all goes well with your dad.
    We can all relate to the relieving stress part... Get it all out! Once its in the open you will feel stronger, as well as less worn down. Writing does help immensely.

    All the best for your dad and you too!