When I am Broken

Cardwell, this is such an emotional piece. I enjoyed reading all of it, but the part that I enjoyed the most was the last stanza because it reminded me so much of myself. That is one of the reasons why I love the rain because of the privacy it gives you when you just want to cry from heartbreak. Very sad and emotional. Thank you for sharing this. 5/5

This was such a simple yet striking piece. I loved everything about it, the raw emotions and that feeling of total despair. Don't give up :)

Beautiful poem- heartbreaking descriptions, especially the part about being in the rain, because it's true, few can tell when someone is crying.

Keep it up

Very emotional poem i'm tearing up very touching i know how you feel very deep and sad poem i have a scar when i cut myself it never goes away once you cut the scar remains their forever i love the flow of this poem it's amazing and i like the title 5/5