Paradise.

Hi

What a great example of a short poem that works, You make your point with only a few lines. Poets (or Poetess') can fall into the trap of having too many stanzas with repetition because they do not feel they have fully shared their message.
I love the image portrayed by 'poetic calligraphy'
It makes me think of more traditional poems, every word earning it's place with fantastically beautiful flow, almost one in the eye of the arty scattered on the page modern poems.
'Burst' and 'passion' really shouldn't go with 'whisper' but it works here, that is testament to your writing ability.
I also love the term 'flirt with twilight' is the mist trying to overpower the dark, are they having a battle to dominate the sky?
Great love and passion in this with only 10 lines, well done.

Short ,beautiful and meaningful poem.Well written!

I liked it!Great job!

Your poetry speaks so much in so few words.....the images and truth that your heart feels for this love of yours. Love the nature you include as well as that sense of being able to inspire the world with this beautiful paradise.....how you can do anything with those sweet kisses.

Great job :]

This is so very beautiful and full of passion. the imagery is just so lovely and you have a great use of diction 5/5

Hehe, I like it!! Reminded me of a song when I read the title.

Very cute, sweet, little poem.

Love it :)