Your poem was really sad but it was also really good ....was any of it true? Im truly sorry if it was... Well keep writing

omg!! ur poem was soo Good!! it was really sad and i loved the way it ended coz it rhymed with the other line.. keep up da good work!

love stephyG

Wow. This poem was so sad it brought tears to my eyes...Has this happened to you? If yes, then I'm so sorry! No one deserves this. This is such a great poem, and very well written! Keep up the great work! Take care :)

No this did not happen to me. Just a fear of mine. Getting pregnant at a young age. Seen it happen too many times. So NO it's not true on my count. Thanks for your comments guys!!! It means alot!

Love,
Danielle

wow dainelle! so sad and ur right, stuff like this happens way too much

Wow!! This poem is......... is just so so great. You are such a good writer. I was also wondering if it was true.
Ashlynn

Goodness Gracious!!! ... 5!