Beating for you

by Biancas Veil   May 24, 2012


This is my heart it only beats for you
Nothing in this world or heaven can make it untrue
I will yell out all of my intentions
That I love you will be but one thing that I mention
I would reach up to the heavens and pluck a guardian angel to keep you safe
Never again will you be haunted by any wraith
There will be no awkward moment
For now i am only looking for atonement
But this is only while my blood runs red
After that I will be dead

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  • 12 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Wraith is a scottish word for ghost or spirit :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Wraith is a scottish word for ghost or spirit :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Wraith is a scottish word for ghost or spirit :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    --Great piece. I like the simplicity of your words here and the natural ideas that you conveyed how much the persona loves the person in this poem. Heart soothing and very sweet...

    Never again will you be haunted by any wraith
    There will be no awkward moment
    For now i am only looking for atonement
    But this is only while my blood runs red
    After that I will be dead

    --Nice ending. But try to try to check the "wraith--it should be wrath" in the first line. Nonetheless, I really enjoy this piece. Keep writing more:))
    5/5
    ~C

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm I think this is nice write
    I like the idea in it
    your wording was going well with it
    This poem's tone is lovely
    great read 5/5
    Keep writing =)

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