Comments : Lucius, My Boy Of Light

  • 12 years ago

    by Darclyfe

    I really thought this was good for some one of your age. Very well impressive 5/5
    Keep up the writing and you'll get better! :D

    • 12 years ago

      by The Ninja

      Thanks. i wrote this a little while ago. the aftermath is described in 'Glowing Ghosts'.