Fallen but Not Broken

by Jump from Life   May 24, 2012


Its true I've finished,
that my soul has vanished.
Left alone in the sadness
that will never leave.

Yet if you look deep inside,
you truly have nothing to hide.
The pain is what has made you stronger
than all the rest.

I have fallen from grace
to this cold, unforgiving place
but, I will never break
because that would take strength.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Illusion

    I like the rythm, the message and everything. Great poem...

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    It's true I've finished
    that my soul has vanished
    left alone in the sadness
    that will never leave

    Yet if you look deep inside
    you truly have nothing to hide
    the pain is what has you made stronger
    then all the rest

    I have fallen from grace
    to this cold, unforgiven place
    but, I will never break

    Amazing lines, sadness so well desribed
    a painful thing, this sadness
    feeling left alone in this forbidden place
    it makes us in time so much stronger
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Nice poem and nice way to make the club's name to use lol

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I really enjoyed it, this is an outtanding poe, i think it's one of your greatest, very inspiring, and excatly how I feel, wonderful job

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Allie you are strong and you have a whole family here who love you and are here for you. wee'll all help you get through this