by Tyler Moore May 24, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
(Stanzas in [] refer to the son and those without to the dad) |
by Xanthe
This is an interesting and creative write. The shifting of narrators wasn't distracting at all, and it still flowed really well. It's an enjoyable piece to read, so thank you for telling me to read this. As for the rhymes, the were clean, so I like that. |
by Silent Girl
Very emotional , sad and deep poem 5/5 |