Never leave me Dreamless

Comment from judging:

I voted for this poem last week and feel it still gets a vote this week. A very emotional poem that I really can't put into words how it makes me feel. I just connected to this piece in ways not all poetry grabs you. It's strong and captivating, and I really hope to see it on the front page!

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The sadness, the pain, but the vivid hope is what makes this poem for me. The author shows such dispair and it's vague enough that everyone can relate to it, but in the end always putting it in God's hands is what will guide you. I think this is a beautiful piece and I absolutely love the imagery portrayed here. I could go on for hours about this poem, it's one I've read a few times now and I'm just blown away by the maturity and wisdom in this poem. Fantastic.

Yaki,

WOW. Awesome title!!!

I love the way you have opened up this poem. The first stanza blew me away completely.

It's like you need to have something washed over you to clean your aura and make you feel again.

The whole poem is filled with emotions and I can feel them. I love that about your work.

Awesome write Yaki

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Lmao Tara! Haha!

Yaki that is wonderful! I mean omg!
Will comment later! Yes yes I suck. mwa

Ah, to be a dreamless soul would certainly be regretful. Lovely writing... Great concept... Good use of imagery.
5/5

Alisha

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