Comments : What's Love ?

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    "Love is simply love."

    --I like this line...yeah, I agree with you love is the feeling that sometimes cannot understand, but you just feet it...sometimes amazed and asked yourself, is this true love?Haha,:D

    "And it happens so fast we don't even notice, in a fraction of seconds BUM..
    You're in love."

    --I like how you write it, very relatable. In some instances, you haven't noticed that you were drifted in the river of love.

    "Thinking about spending the rest of your life with that one person.
    And just... Believe that everything is Ok just for once."

    Good written part. Simple but very meaningful message. I like this poem...a lot, and I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing more:))
    5/5
    ~C

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Let not the Start, overwhelm you. Love is a seed, it grows with time.