My Beautiful Nightmare

by Yrem Crish   May 25, 2012


One night...

I saw myself
in the midst of meadow,
confused the vastness-
beset under the
silver midnight moon...

I walked but nowhere to go;
I was afraid as my heart
raiment with fears...

There's someone
I saw afar-

Did I knew him?

I cannot see his face;
And my heart started to girdle-
with weariness while staring
the fortress moon glittering
in my eyes.

The quiescent night,
made me unsafe...

I saw him in dark garment;
He walked nearer me-
And saw his face
draped in shadow that
wrecked my heart
to screamed.

...He was a beast?!
Feeling afraid and confused
while running away from him.

I saw myself whisked
to escape from his trail,

But, I felt he was...
following me,
chasing me,
wherever I run.
Until my knees crippled
and stumbled down.

I have no strength
to fight this feeling;
I just closed my eyes-
waited for the time
he severed my body
and ate my soul...

When, I opened my eyes;
I was spur the ambient
of invigorated world,
confused about the golden sun
glowing in my face
and dried away my tears.

...I was in the paradise?
My heart pounding...

I glared to him
and coxed from seeing
his clothe in red-
Red as like fertile roses
surrounded the two us.
He unveiled his face
and revealed,
his true beauty.
I was amazed,
from mistaken him
a beast.

He walked near me,
and took my hand.
As I stood facing him
he picked a rose,
placed it beyond my ear.
And he whispered...
"Don't be afraid,
I am the Destiny of Love"

I like people who analyzing and speculating my poem:))

Written:
5/24/12
12:30 midnight

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kylead

    It was messy but despite everything thats written it keeps you reading thats what matters to me i quickly lose interest if i dont like what i am reading and i read it twice so good work keep it up mery

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The way I understood, it is the
    fear of love, you are running from
    Enjoyed reading, quite interesting and
    mysterious 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    I am going to analyze this one. Promise.

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    First Xanthe said all about the mistakes xD
    Yeh it is a bit messy (as u said) but I enjoyed reading alot the feeling I am not sure about it
    is it love or fear or mix of both
    u used many words which gave many meanings
    Your tone was changing from line to line
    once sad other confusing and some loving
    It was really enjoyable read 5\5 keep writing =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    The message is a little unclear to me.
    Did you find love but did you think it was a beast at first?

    Some words and sentences strike me as a little awkward.

    I didn't know him,
    not even saw his face;
    but, my heart girdled-
    with weariness while staring
    the fortress moon glittering
    in my eyes with unknown feeling...

    needs work

    4/5