"Tears falling upon this red rose,
Cuts are upon my heart,
Hoping to never forget your once ago touch"

So beautifully sad.
Loved it (:
5/5

Awww very emotional and powerful

Oh, dear Queen!

This poem is like the best music: So beautiful, yet so very sad. I love it! Your wording and flow of this poem are beautiful!

I truly hope you can feel better in the future, I know how you feel now, it's happened to me plenty of times before. Just remember, we are fallen, but not broken! And you are our Queen! But if you need to talk to someone, I'm here :)

5/5

The poem sounds like a love lost but appears to end in the death of the lost love. Am i right ?
Should the word parish not read perish, a minor criticism for a touching, moving poem. Nice one Ash.

I really liked this, it brought back memories of Josh, and it was a really well done piece. You relly poured out your emotions and I truly believed those are the best poems out there, 100/100

I really liked this, it brought back memories of Josh, and it was a really well done piece. You relly poured out your emotions and I truly believed those are the best poems out there, 100/100

Love again lol
Well this was umm 'lovely' xD
Till now I think this is one of your best
It was so well penned that even tho the idea has been mentioned alot before I didnt get bored ehile reading
It had a sad tone mixed with love
5/5
Keep writing =)

Losing someone is hard
I can't even imagine the pain
but you must endure and go on

5/5