by LittleMermaid May 25, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
They live with little happiness that quickly hides |
by Amreen
Beautiful poem LM... You don't know dear how much your words speak their pain... it is sorrowful to hear this n I hope they will have something much better in life...:) |
by TJ Standen
Wow, this is very touching and a great piece of poetry. It is so beautiful and it brought tears to my eyes. Well done |
Thank u for the comment...m happy that u liked my poem..i tried my best to jot down what i saw n felt that time.it was so hard for me to control my tears when i saw those children n their pitiful condition. |
by Yrem Crish
I am speechless with this poem. All that I can say is Wow! I love it girl...I like the way you write how the child is innocent. Really wonderful piece. |
by Xanthe
I feel like writing rhymed poetry again haha. The message is just beautiful. |
by average thoughts
This poem is a grt piece for al those innocent kids |