This is a wonderful, wonderful poem that is written by a very caring, thoughtful and loving person.
Your poem is beautiful Little Mermaid, and your command of English is very good indeed!
I am so pleased that you continued your writing, your piece here does you much credit.
This is a beautiful poem. God bless you always.

This poem is a grt piece for al those innocent kids

I feel like writing rhymed poetry again haha. The message is just beautiful.
A little editing would polish this piece:

"But still bear beautiful smile and sparkle on their eyes"
on--in
smile--smiles

"They are bound up in this very small world"
Up--to. Eradicate 'in'

Other than that, this is beauty in its rawest and purest form. Keep writing!
-X

I am speechless with this poem. All that I can say is Wow! I love it girl...I like the way you write how the child is innocent. Really wonderful piece.
5/5
~C

Wow, this is very touching and a great piece of poetry. It is so beautiful and it brought tears to my eyes. Well done

Beautiful poem LM... You don't know dear how much your words speak their pain... it is sorrowful to hear this n I hope they will have something much better in life...:)