Suturated~

by SarZz   Jun 28, 2004


Though its not raining on me
I'm saturated in this cloudburst,
Nowhere can I see sunshine,
It surely is making me pine,

The rain speaks to me,
Tell me things never told before,
Its pouring on me with all its splendour and lustre,
I like it , don't deplore,

On me,Ive allowed it to pour,
So that it wipes away me tear,
So that away it tears,
My wicked dreams,

On me,Its splashing and striking,
But I'm unaffected,
I'm asking it to unbreak me,
Because I'm already burnt and torrid...

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  • 20 years ago

    by In_my_own_shadow

    See, I told you that I would look at your poems!!!
    Yes, You do have and Amazing talent!!!
    this is souch a touching poem!!
    GREAT JOB!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    hiya sara =) thanx for visiting my site again =) well i loved this poem =) gave it a 5 =) looking forward for more =) ima come by from time to time to read some of your good stuff =) muahhhhhhh much love

  • 20 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Wow You Have Amazing Talent! From Your Poem I Would Of Guessed You Were At Least 18!