The heart often has good intension
but for some reason or another we let
the one down tht loves us the most
So many questions, yet no answers
By the time they realize its often too late
Your gain, his loss
5/5
Awwwww sweety this poem is soo emotional! and yes it hurts but one day you won't hurt anymore okay sweety? and i love this poem! 5/5 from me lol
12 years ago
by Max
Hmm it is cool poem so emotional
but I think it is time to use punctuation it will make your poem flow better
I like your word choice and how u repeated 1st line in every stanza and the style in 2nd line was cool too
Overall great poem
5/5 keep writing =)