Got to say, the title just pulled me in. Got curious to see what this piece is all about.

Your words just flow like pure magic, I loved the images you created, the feelings I got from it. Read it twice to be honest, and still think its fantastic everytime I read some more.

Stunning piece sista.

What a cache of words you have here, I'm
in awe of your prowess as a Poetess. I've
enjoyed every line, but the second stanza
reminds me of myself 20-25 years ago---

Being, filtered among a garden of
shameful bluebells

Wonderful writing, just wonderful.
Peace and Blessings

Perfectly wrotten, I also love how it flows:)

Holy crap in a bucket of wet cement...how short, effective and moving...damn girl..i've been away too damn long...nearly flawless..damn, damn, damn, is the best i got for ya!
johnny

I am too sorry that I can't leave a damn detailed comment. I seriously have no time (nor much of credit haha) that is why I am going to be totally dork and try to express my 'wow' in brief (hopefully!)

I LOVE this for its style. You began it with such a way, such a wording, such a title too! I didn't expect to be THAT blown away in the end!

I seriously enjoyed this, Andrea. Of course, nominated on Monday.
Now wish me tons of luck because I have finals. About 36456318 etc books and I ain't ready!

Love you, baby.

At first when I read the title of your poem I thought you had written something about Harry Potter and that egg which he had to listen to under water.

The poem itself is awesome. I love the words and the flow! I'm in awe!

Awesome write

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