Amor numquam morietur

Hm, I was just stalking your profile today haha and came across this piece. I'm always quite skeptical in reading love poems but this one was really well-written and I'm glad I did not skip this. The dedication added a spark to this poem; it added emotion and relatability. Again, the rhymes flowed really well. I love the diction you've used, really consistent all throughout, and it fit the Latin phrase you used.
I had a friend who died of cancer and whenever I read any poem about that, it really leaves me depressed. However, love was predominant in the atmosphere of this piece, so it has this hopeful tone to it, which I liked.
Sorry to hear about you grandfather. Hope all the best for him..
Keep writing :)
-X

Very sweet poem,
love can gives that push to live more intensively

5/5

I love this poem, and its simplicity:)
Very well written, great job:)

Love-
Love it's a beauty, the best feeling give to man kind but also the creator of many other feelings for we love and from that love other feelings are born.

I like this piece, I like pieces that make me think and this one was sweet. Despised being ill, it shows that there is love and that that love will not die.

This really got to me.... I loved the elegant flow...the wording was elegant and the rhyme scheme was wonderful!! very nice!!