Comments : Today I Realize

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I don't know if this is your best piece, but it is my favorite by you so far. Nominated next week for sure :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    This is so beautiful
    I love this poem alot
    Deserve a nomination
    Keep writing=)

    Edited: sorry I am out of votes for this week =/

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    OMG O.O
    Whats this?!?
    It truly deserves a nomination and hopefully a win, my favorite by you as well. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I have to agree with everybody

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Next week nomination for sure.

    This is breathtaking, I know announce you as the "Queen of metaphors" O_O

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Beautiful as you are.... i loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Noura, when you post a poem into the miscellaneous category, I never know what to expect...

    but I always know it will be amazing, and I was right again...This is breathtaking, the whole piece just feels so right, it is so you and I love your metaphors and your ending just fits perfectly to the whole piece.

    Loved this and nominated for sure...Oh yes!

  • 12 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    Ill be waiting till you realize that you write magical wonders,
    You are talanted :p, ma3 shwayt om 3aj2a. A perfect mix for a class A poetss.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Ummm...

    WOW!

    Loved it. Beautiful, sad and full of metaphors and images that seriously blew me away. I always enjoy reading your poetry hun!

    LOVED IT!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    So many beautiful metaphors! love it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I've read alot of your work dearest poetess...but this is spectacular!! Seriously your use of metaphor and imagery is epic.....i bow down to the poetess :-) x

  • 12 years ago

    by sibyllene

    You have such a creative way of grabbing objects and shaping them into your poem. Door sills and lip gloss? I feel like all I write about are suns and trees and stuff, I'd like to have a little more of your ethereality (yes, I just made up that word for you) that's somehow rooted in interesting objects.

    "Today, I realize

    that you are far,
    the kind of far that
    grabs me
    too close"

    I love this.

  • 12 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I know this feeling all too well. Excellent write.

  • 12 years ago

    by silvershoes

    "not any kind of magic-creators"

    I think it should be magic-creator. No plural necessary.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Congratulations Noura, Very much deserved :)
    mwah

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    You will always be a CLASS-A poetess.
    Enjoy the title :)

    and congrats
    ooo

  • WOW! 5/5

    Just one thing, in the last verse 'stich' should be 'stitch' I believe. Minor typo. (:

    Congrats on the win!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mathieu

    Absolutely great!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Wow, this is amazing and it really deserved that win. Congrats

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    Comments from judging:

    Although I don't like the use of "un-daydream", I did like the rest of the poem. Again another strong poem this week about poetry and metaphors, riddled with beautiful imagery. I especially liked the ending the best, stitching is a great verb she used here and I felt it was really creative. Typically you see weave, so stitching gave it a little bit more of an "edge" to me. Awesome write