Salacity

by Maple Tree   May 26, 2012


Red savory lips

dance upon a pool

of sapphire tears

marked within edges

of your vision,

I'm completely submissive

to the union about to mark its destiny-

Come hither, as I showcase

the markings of an illusion,

consummated within the heavens

of a stargazer's salacity....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very nice poem!

    Keep on writing ;)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Simply beautiful. Loved it!!!

    I loved the images of the lips and tears. There was a hint of sensual feelings in this poem and I think it's from the words you've chosen to write with.

    Awesome

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I love the metaphor here:)

    I love the poem, and I enjoyed reading it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Andrea, I loved this...nothing else to say...

    You are amazing!!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    'Come hither, as I showcase

    the markings of an illusion,'

    This and the stargazer bit are omg.

    You are awesome!

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