Comments : One World

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    You truly write some kick as* poetry, MarryAnne.

    I couldn't resist commenting on this one, and darn my finals. Reality will always hurt those who hide themselves in compliments. You just expressed that perfectly.

    'of course, I've always wanted
    to awaken others with my dreams
    and don't doubt that I'll show
    what they can be made of'

    I feel too jealous that it wasn't me who wrote this. Just perfect. Can't add more. I am desperate in how I might praise this poem and do it just.

    Nominated next week. Better wins!