Comments : Welcome me into you

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Love like a white dove"
    I love that part, doves are well know
    once they have found a mate nothing can
    tear them apart.
    This is such an beautiful poem you wrote"
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I want to embrace you,
    feel the blowing breeze of your love..
    to breath in,
    its ingredients,
    whatever is left of you ,
    merge to together for better future.

    i absolutely love this part, the love is so pure, when love is weak you know you really want to do everything you can for a better future, i love these lines....such a lovely poem you came up with this piece....nice work :)