When the Light Shone Through

by tainted melody   May 27, 2012


Clouded by emotion,
blinded by her mind.
Searching for an answer,
she knew she couldn't find.

The fog that blocks our vision,
she could not escape.
Full of indecision,
her view now changing shape.

Losing focus in his presence,
and control by his side.
She can't seem to stop it,
it's all a downhill slide.

One day he says ' I love you'
the words she wants to hear.
Thats when the light shone through,
and her emotions became clear.

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  • 12 years ago

    by CryingHeart

    Awesome

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Well-written. Just a few words from someone we love gives us hope. I think the rhymes flowed nicely. Great job. Keep writing (:
    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Nicely penned.

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow! This was absolutely amazing! I loved how you described the emotions here especially when someone doesn't realize their emotions and it suddenly hits them as if a light was shone through. The last stanza u had a small typo you put emotins instead of emotions. :p but this poem was well written and flawless and had great meaning and is going into my favs. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow! This was absolutely amazing! I loved how you described the emotions here especially when someone doesn't realize their emotions and it suddenly hits them as if a light was shone through. The last stanza u had a small typo you put emotins instead of emotions. :p but this poem was well written and flawless and had great meaning and is going into my favs. :)

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