I enjoyed the rhymes :)
And also that the sins will be washed out, I believe god do forgive our sins too.

Hm, a little inconsistent with the capitalisation today? The Hs on 'He' and 'Him' should all be capitalised since you're pertaining to God.
I must say, the personification/capitalisation with: Believe, Reigns, Love--I didn't quite get.
The rhymes were good though. Also, I love the message.

''Cause God washed my soul out!'
This line was a bit confusing..? 'Washed my soul out', was rather nonsensical. I must advice you not to sacrifice clarity for rhyme.

But overall, a well-written piece and I like it. Keep writing
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Yes, this one was a bit "on the spot" for a forum post. I'm considering deletion

Do not delete it! It's beautiful. I'm just rather picky today haha

There is a God and he is near.
He has given his life to pay for our sins.
Everybody has a judgement day coming
and we better start preparing repenting
our sins and cleansing our soul
5/5

No time to comment but what a piece! Nominated it for the weekly contest and hope it gains votes! And do NOT delete it. Don't you dare lol. Mwa.

Wow,,I absolutely loved it,,u sure said it and layed it all down,,its so true and real,,perfect honesty,,its a heavenly poem 5/5

Also I must say,,nomination :D

Hope outside Christ Jesus, is loss. Him who knows God true, has found Life. Good job!

Beautiful poem.... But I hope you'll wait a while to see his face :)

Love this poem. God will come again....<3

Cardwell, this poem is amazing. The flow is great and the message is crystal clear. My favorite part would have to be the first stanza because it always makes me happy to think of something like that. I want to see the Angels when I go to heaven. I want them to sing for me and welcome me home. What a beautiful poem.

Excellent
5/5

I agree with Dagmar, as I had said previously, your talent is not buried in the ground! You do honor God, when he appears you will not be ashamed.

Great poem!
5/5
Ken