Lost

by tyler   May 27, 2012


In the darkness i hide
i watch, i cry
i will never truly be alive
your touch, i miss
your smile, your lips
torn away, one last glimpse
the noose, it hurts
my eyes, they burn
my heart, it stops
without you, im lost

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  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    You seem to rhyme yet not rhyme, but the (dare I say) lyrical flow makes it feel as if it is being rhymed. Different, but I liked it.

    • 12 years ago

      by tyler

      Its better when read aloud, its almost a darker jazz style free verse. Thanks though ^.^

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Short but meaningful. Not bad at all. Great rite

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I loved the idea i thought you could do alot more ... i was unsure if you were trying to rhyme or not othrr then tht your going in the rihht direction well done

    • 12 years ago

      by tyler

      Its more of a jazz style tempo.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    Really good
    Deep, emotional
    Well written
    From the heart
    And true
    Great job 5/5

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