Tossed Into Oblivion

by Hannah Lizette   May 28, 2012


I'm sinking...
deeper than ever before
spiraling out of control
into this black abyss.

I'm drowning...
gasping for air
gargling salt water
slowly taking my last breath.

I'm deteriorating...
as I look into the mirror
I'm decomposing before my eyes
I try to scream but my windpipe is clenched.

I'm suffocating...
you're the pillow over my face
holding pressure so I can't escape
sharing evil laughs as my body goes limp.

I'm suffering...
wounds that don't bleed
a heart that won't mend
our memories are stuck on repeat.

I'm lonely...
you tossed me into a dark oblivion
used and confused
after all, I still only hunger for you.

Copyright 2012: Hannah K.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    Some serious heart ache. i like the way your brought the darkness out on this one. again awesome write!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Omar

    It was sad, but you did a great job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Gruesome but awesome :) great description

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is so deep ... somtimes a heart brakes so hard that it feel like its dead and can never be revived i loved the flow and how you showed the loss and pain of the speaker
    a very sad piece written with raw talent and emotion

    Really good piece

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Oh Hannah, I imagine something happened to make you write these poems :( I have been reading your latest and I discovered a drastic transformation. I am sorry if something happened.

    This poems expresses intense emotions and none of them are the good kind. I loved the whole poem because you expressed what happens after someone breaks your heart.

    If something actually happened, I am sorry. But do not fret because you will find love again. Beautiful, raw poem.

    5/5

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