The many shades of black
I love that title, well chosen
the whole poem to me was well written
and the dark described 5/5

This poem is very heart breaking, I like how you expressed that you wish you could take the pains you might have caused away. I love so many lines I can point to just one, this is one of the best poems I have read.
Execellent write..

Really nice; love the title and it has a great flow! 5/5