Mattias-

You have penned an elegant display of words and I loved the creative detail you brought with the message...beautiful love piece from you...love this!!

What a beautiful love poem
written with so elegantly and well penned
you did an wonderful job

This is a beautiful and heart touching piece, I reallly like your choice of words and the feeling this piece gives me. Love is beautiful when it's real.

Very nice word usage and such a beautiful love poem. 5/5

Even if I wanted to elude them--
to escape their gaze, I could not,
nay, for they are always on my mind

This is a beautiful piece i must say, this is an awesome piece of poetry... I loved it, and i agree it is elegant... nice work on this :)

It is elegant, I enjoyed reading it. I also liked that it's a love poem. I found this one sweet but i still have to look for the meaning of one or two words.

I hope that what I thought they meant was the meaning. Well written.

Really great poem. I love your choice of words and the way you express your emotions. Also, this had an incredibly flow 5/5

mandy :)