Are you going nowhere?

by CRAFTY KEN   May 28, 2012


Get out of the bars, look at the stars, what do you see? This wonderland, created for you and me. The soft rain mixed with blue, the rainbow with
its hue. The songbird sings its tune, the melody is sweet, the dew glistens on the grass beneath your feet. The Eagle soars high above, now you see it, the creation from God, with his love.

Author Ken

May 2012

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  • 9 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks all!

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice! short, good flow, lovely words... but I think it needs a bit more feeling into it instead of just description.
    Great write though!

  • 9 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Ben.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely and a melodious rhythm to the piece - excellent.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cardwell

    This poem is great! It was well written, and the rhymes were unforced. I am not one who is good at writing the "Religious" poems, but you, sir, are a genius.

    Keep it up!

    -Cardwell

    • 12 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Cardwell, we have lots in common.
      I too came from a broken family, spent time in a Home for boy's and had an Aunt Rose. Cardboard fixed the holes in my shoes, didn't taste real butter until I was 19. I have walked with the Lord since I was 12. You also know him, he has given you a talent, you have not buried it in the ground!
      I see this in your poems and your honesty. Keep up the good work, God bless you my brother. Ken

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