Comments : Don't Take Him Away From Me

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    That fear of losing somebody you love so dearly. Getting yourself prepared for the woerse senerio, lighting a candle, asking
    God and the Angels to keep him save.
    Excellent and sad Andrea. I did not know
    how otherwise to respond and comment.
    Be strong and keep on having faith in the man above, I do believe in miracles. From this point on it is all in Gods hands.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I don't know, the melancholy and nostalgia fills the day, today. I'm in tears, first liz then I come and read this poem, I'm going to try to not get emotional much because I start rambling and I feel that I dont make sense.

    then I abstract from commenting on the poem and instead i comment to what I feel.

    and content wise, this is a well written poem.
    that has tore my heart.

    Keep believing, continue having faith just as much as you have whenever you light that candle at nights.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I am with Luce in this one, today seems to be a heavy hearted mood around and I understand it so very very well. I've also been roaming in that beautiful part of youtube, that makes you all emotional, but because of the beauty of the songs and then reading two heartfelt and pained poems just got to me.

    I mean the title is already heartbreaking as it is, but even though I knew what I might read, I wasn't prepared well enough for the amount of emotions that would get to me, captivate my heart and make sure I feel you.

    I haven't even been in that situation and I doubt my feelings while reading your poems come anywhere close to what you endure/experience, but it's just so touching nonetheless. It's not only your fear of losing your very loved husband that shines through, but also how much you love and admire him, how much he supports you and how much love the two of you share.

    I respect you two very much and I wish you the best, the very best, the very bestest! *hugs*

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Andrea my lovely,

    This poem is probably one of the deepest ones I've read from you so far. I have seen some pretty sad one's from you but when you start writing about death and praying to the Gods not to take James away, I think it reaches a new depth completely.

    I was saddened by your words and I know that so many people can relate to this piece which makes it even more special. I think it will reach a lot of people who are going through the same and know someone who had or has cancer.

    I will pm you a little more

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Sista I don't know what to say.I really don't. It is meaningless to write be strong because we are never strong before some things. Just wanna tell you that your love is beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I just bawled my eyes out while reading this. :( So full of love and worry. I will pray for you both. <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I dunno where to start, and I dunno how I'll type now. My eyes are full of tears of sadness and joy. Sadness cuz Im all the way here, and my inability to do a thing, all I can do is support you. Joy is because I met someone like you strong and loving. You have a wonderful soul that touched many of us so deeply. Nouras poem is right, your not alone.
    Sorry for any typo Im not wearing my glasses.
    Love you Andreay
    Hugs

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Being one who has battled cancer and comes from a family of those who have lost and those who have won from this gawdawful disease, I sympathize so very deeply with you... its never easy, yet he has remained strong and supported you, as you have supported him, your love for each other is priceless... I'll be lighting a healing candle for you both when I get home this evening... I wish there were more I could do... I'll keep you both in my thoughts and wish you both strength to get you through this... always know that you are in my heart, no matter what has come and gone, you're always there... this was very hard to read, so sad and heartfelt, full of love and hope...

    hugs n love

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Andrea,

    The way these words show on the page, I can see the emotion in them, I can feel your pain and hear your prayers...

    to know someone I love is hurting and worried about there future, fear of losing the one they love pains me, I wish I could reach out and hug you, but all I can do is tell you, I am thinking of you and pray for you and James,

    love always my dear
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This is a sad poem andrea... but it defintely a good one too....the sadness spillled out of this and i know is hard to let someone go no matter what they always linger around in memories...and things that remind us of them....

    this was a goood piece....... and deserves the 5 vote... nice writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    So sad
    You are fantastic writer
    I love this poen alot
    Fav.
    5/5