Comments : Mighty one of the East

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I adore this piece.... The rhythm of nature is dancing within every line!! You did a dazzling display of imagery here within this poem....very nice!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    "An amethyst and a topaz
    sleep in my calloused hands.
    Flutes melodies beyond the clouds
    invade this sacred hour
    when spiders weave the threads of love
    and hawks dream about power."
    -my favorite part!
    very great piece! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Beautiful piece. I love the diction and imagery and metaphors and everything else in this piece. Truly deserving of the win. Keep writing :)
    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Congratulations on your win! Will comment later, sistah!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Awesome poem Karla, full of wonderful images and the rhyming was so beautiful and not forced. I love this write!

    Also congrats on the win!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Mom Pike

    This is pretty! Different but unique and colorful and exciting! You are defiantly a nature lover and I really like this poem.