I love this piece, sir :)
Just a few typos that should be fixed and this would be perfect!
massage--message
yesterdays--yesterday's
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The subtle rhymes work so well with the sweet message of this piece. Keep writing!
-X

I love the part
love is caring
life is sharing

I love the poem! The first line is awesome!!! It blew me away

x

You hit me again

You hit me again