Comments : For You Know Best

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Uhmm, I'm not sure how to critique this one,
    I'm not sure how to react to this one,

    I just know that no body should control anyone, and that's not what this poem is saying unless there is some sarcasm in it.. though, I didn't sensed it.

    • 12 years ago

      by AnotherPlasticSmile

      Well i wrote this because i was so frustrated with my parents controlling every aspect of my life definitely not asking to be controlled but i'm not sure if i'd call it sarcasm