Eerie yet good. It reminds me of my old band teacher. The last two lines are my favorite part. Good job

Thank you, I tried to mix my love of music and my suicidal feelings :)

It is extramly good. i loved that you mixed music and suicide. two of my favorite things to read about. i would have liked it more if it was a little longer and you discribed a few more things. but all in all very good job. (:

A lot of times repeating words is a good thing. it helps to get the point threw. you did a great job it was just short. i think that you have a lot of potential as a poet (: