"My life is a page i'm always trying to fill,
Like a deck of cards im always trying to deal,"

-the I in "I'm" should be capitalized. I think it would also sound better if you didn't put "Like" in there. I think "My life is a page I'm always trying to fill, a deck of cards I'm always trying to deal."

"My like is so crazy like a physcward ,
Like i'm walking alone a diving board
about to jump into the ocean full of odd creature"

- it should say "My life" instead of like..and it's *psych ward. Again I think it would sound better if the "Like" wasn't there. "I'm walking *along a diving board, about to jump into the ocean full of odd *creatures"

other than those few errors, it's a good piece. keep writing :)