by AnotherPlasticSmile May 29, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Its bliss in all essence |
by Paul Gondwe
Wow, the ending really amazed me, i felt it was really creative. Your wording was beautiful and the poem flowed really well. I would only suggest you not capitalize all letters, especially at the beginning of a line since other letters seem to be continuing from the previous line. |