Omg.. it was just amazing.. i loved it :) ... but i think it is off rather than of in the last line of fourth stanza.. overall, great piece... enjoyable read.. keep writing =)

Omg.. it was just amazing.. i loved it :) ... but i think it is off rather than of in the last line of fourth stanza.. overall, great piece... enjoyable read.. keep writing =)

Love is something so beautiful and
amazing, yet hard to describe.
When true love arrives, the one your heart desires, you know. A fling is just something
that may last for a while, but true love
is all about making sacrifices and compromises. Its a two way street
a give and take, a mutual understanding
excellent written 5/5

Awww that's soo sad im sorry sweety!
good poem tho....
5/5 from me

Lady Anastasia

Quite nice
Well written poem
I love the ending the most in this poem xD

5/5 keep writing =)

The tittle is eye catching. Its force me to read this poem hehhe. Good poem n very bright!!