About love

by Emma from the Netherlands   May 30, 2012


When we first met
I didn't know what to think...
Was our contact going to last
Or will our memories stay in the past?
Will we ever meet again?
Will we try to make it work as much as we can?
Meeting someone can be confusing
The person can make you or break you
Make you feel happy or make you feel sad
Or give you a feeling you've never had...
Love can heal you or destroy you
Or make you feel you don't know what to do...
Will you use your common sense or will you follow your heart?
If your love is strong, it won't tear you apart...

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  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This was a really good write I love seeing new writers :)

    Its simple yet effected

    I would say try and describe in more detail or more emotion to get a more deeper image for the reader

    It's not somthing your doing wrong I just think it would make your pieces even better then they are now

    Never stop writing
    Your a good talent

    Tony :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Richie

    Great poem, you are very talented. My only advice is draw with your words. paint a picture with colors. I see poetry in colors and yours i see is very good and it has the colors but move them into a picture and you will truly have a master work of art.
    5 Starts.

  • 12 years ago

    by Alexandra Jozelia

    We never know what will happen and still we want to take that chance.
    Nice Poem :3

    5/5

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