We never know what will happen and still we want to take that chance.
Nice Poem :3

5/5

Great poem, you are very talented. My only advice is draw with your words. paint a picture with colors. I see poetry in colors and yours i see is very good and it has the colors but move them into a picture and you will truly have a master work of art.
5 Starts.

This was a really good write I love seeing new writers :)

Its simple yet effected

I would say try and describe in more detail or more emotion to get a more deeper image for the reader

It's not somthing your doing wrong I just think it would make your pieces even better then they are now

Never stop writing
Your a good talent

Tony :)