Lmao oh gosh this is a good poem to read lol can you send me this poem? i need to use it for a friend of mine lol btw the emotions are in here and so is the imagery nice job! :)
5/5 from me!

Love the emotions chels! Had no idea that he would die in the end!:| great words I could picture it. It also flowed nicely! 5/5:)