Comments : A poem for the lambs

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I think you are hiding an awful lot of pain and sadness behind this dark poem... well written, and always worth the read :) Love and hugs
    lostlove

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    From my reading, there seems to be some anger and confusion behind the sadness and pain.

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Great Write Karla!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Karla,

    I love the title of this piece. I don't think your writing about actual lambs but that is used as a metaphor. The way I see lambs, I see them as something innocent, something young and vulnerable, especially to predetors. I read the poem and it feels like there's this sad tone throughout the words and it makes me wonder who are these lambs that you speak of? Is it someone you know or is it yourself?

    This poem made me think a lot. I loved it!

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