Goodbye
by deadwolf May 31, 2012
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Why should I stay? So I could listen to you tell me how much you cared about him. To hear how much it hurt when he left. We both express how much we cared about each other. But you don't even care I'm leaving. You could have at least said goodbye. |
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11 years ago
by WintersAngel
Tons of emotion, well written indeed. I love it.
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11 years ago
by Kate
Ok, my last comment was beyond idiotic!! I must have been in a bad mood that day... This is an excellent poem. Very relatable... I like it. Very to the point and strong.
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12 years ago
by Maple Tree
Its really hard on the heart when a person doesn't say goodbye :-( this piece reflects the pain and sadness you feel...emotional write... and very powerul
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12 years ago
by Kate
Hmm... this is good. It's deep but could be a little deeper. Just an idea. Make the reader really understand just how much you were hurt.
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12 years ago
by deadwolf
Thanks for the advice. I guess I'll try to do better next time.
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