Hmm... this is good. It's deep but could be a little deeper. Just an idea. Make the reader really understand just how much you were hurt.

Its really hard on the heart when a person doesn't say goodbye :-( this piece reflects the pain and sadness you feel...emotional write... and very powerul

Ok, my last comment was beyond idiotic!! I must have been in a bad mood that day... This is an excellent poem. Very relatable... I like it. Very to the point and strong.

Tons of emotion, well written indeed. I love it.