When i meet you

by shaira legaspi   Jun 1, 2012


When I meet you,
You make my heart pump,
You you stay on my side,
Through time to time,

You are vulnerable,
You make me felt invisible,
In time that your by my side,
Like someone who interred my life,

When I meet you,
Feels like the happiest day on my life,
Wishing you'r here by my side,
But now I know their's some one else you love,
That was the reason I cry with blood.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Welcome to P & Q.

    This was a good first attempt. You may wish to look at the 3rd line of the 1st stanza:

    You you stay on my side,

    I think it was not you intention to have "you" written twice.

    Keep up the good work.