We could have
No should have
tried a little
But we didn't

This first paragraph captivates the reader and makes
Them eager to read more. Beautiful poem!:) with great
Flow. You have potential. Keep writing!

LOVE IT...ITS GORGEOUS ..........please read my poem 'my fair lady' and tell me how it is...........thanks a ton

Very cool ann very cool, you have a great flow with your word 5/5 all day in this one ne, i look forward to reading more :-)

Let not the Start, overwhelm you. For the End, is where the Truth lies.. In rapport, all is tame, not plain. Anger, is short-cut to the End..