Comments : Little Lost Bird

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This is so sad, the little lost bird feels alone, and doesn't see any blue skies within the sight.
    Though, the sun always comes out and also there are more birds that fly and fly in the sky, so perchance, some day not too far away that little lost bird might find some more birds lurking within his/her sight and if he/she gives some time for her/his wings to heal then he/she can open her/his wings to fly and join them. Though, the bird is caged, :( .. but i'm guessing that if it's caged then it has always been like that ever since she/he was born so she just needs to meet some more birds to finally have a will to sing. the little bird might need some sunlight too.

    I enjoyed some rhymes, and also the content of this piece, It had me thinking and forgive me for my babble. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I love this even though it's very sad. i love the metaphor of the bird... such an beautiful piece with awesome flow. 5/5

  • Thank you. (:

  • Thank you. (:

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Feeling trapped is horrible. great write