A murder of a ...

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Jun 1, 2012


In the middle of this forest
Far from civalisation
Abandand ...
Lifeless...
Lived him .

Darkness completly removes
his very exsistance
He spreads his arms
Takes flight and dissapears ...

His

Heart as black as the image
he portrays, living in solitude
he realises he will spend
his life alone.

In the middle of this forest
A man was walking ,
Walking the foot prints of
noone before him.

Then he stops ...

Lying on the floor bleeding
In the shadows of
the night was ...

In the middle of this forest
Far from civalisation
Abandand ...
Lifeless...
Was the murder of a crow.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    The only thing I see wrong with this is a couple typos civalsation should be "civilization" and realises should be "realized" ... other than that, i really like the concept of this poem, it's unique, something I haven't read yet.

    Great job. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Okay, I liked this piece, the imagery was okay, maybe could have been more vivid to add to the story and the darkness...

    I felt like you used little punctuation and just too many capitals to emphasise words...

    But saying that...It was a good piece

    xxxx

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