The day without you

by lovesick   Jun 1, 2012


The day without you is like the day without the sun.

Surrounded by my friends, I'm suppose to have fun.

I'm looking at them, Smile.. But really I wanna cry.

Keep telling myself.. You will be just fine.

The night without you is like the night without the moon.

I'm praying.. Please baby Please be back soon.

Baby right now I have storm in my heart.

My Body, My brain about to fall apart.

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  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    I like this poem because you have written it in a style i recognise, my own.
    Just one small thing, i think the word suppose would come over better if there was a d on the end of it.
    I can relate to this poem as i think can many others. We have all suffered heartache at some time.
    Simply written, brings the message over loud and clear. Just the way i like it. Well done.

    • 12 years ago

      by lovesick

      I wrote it from my true feeling.. thats all.

      thanks.

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