Comments : The day without you

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    I like this poem because you have written it in a style i recognise, my own.
    Just one small thing, i think the word suppose would come over better if there was a d on the end of it.
    I can relate to this poem as i think can many others. We have all suffered heartache at some time.
    Simply written, brings the message over loud and clear. Just the way i like it. Well done.

    • 12 years ago

      by lovesick

      I wrote it from my true feeling.. thats all.

      thanks.