I like the metaphors here:)
But its kind of sad..
Great job:)

This is so sad and heartbreaking Andrea
to close to home. Don't give up and keep
on standing strong, you can do it.
This is what I admire about you, your
enourmous strenght, never talk about giving
up. If there was a 10 I would give it to you

You always have the best poems and metaphors. this breaks my heart. :( 5/5

I love this piece hun, short but powerful. I can feel the sadness in the words. I like the broken highway line, maybe you feel that there is a connecton there if you feel broken too?

Awesome write

x

The metaphor is just amazing
the poem is short but it holds alot in it
And it is so sad
I like how u could put all this in such short piece
5/5